55 - A Shattered Defense, pt. 1
April 27th, 2017, 8:41 pm
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CombatMagi (Guest), April 27th, 2017, 9:09 pm
Hey some more lore, interesting take on that. The Unovian league ought to have waivers for their challengers (like in Ky-nim's run). So is the challenger someone that has been shown in the comic or is it a random stranger #23?
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ZHODY the delfinator, April 27th, 2017, 10:01 pm
Oh man, this is a really harsh story...
Oh, and that sentence about Ghosts is ab bit confusing, like there's a word missing?
"You know, they say Ghost-types when you are weakened is dangerous, because they can [be] a bit careless about other's life?"
Sorry, that just tripped me up a few times while reading.

Oh, and that sentence about Ghosts is ab bit confusing, like there's a word missing?
"You know, they say Ghost-types when you are weakened is dangerous, because they can [be] a bit careless about other's life?"
Sorry, that just tripped me up a few times while reading.
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pipipipi, April 28th, 2017, 12:01 am
@CombatMagi: Random stranger #23, unfortunately. I thought of making that person as a proper character, but I imagine after the incident they'd just disappear from the Training scene.
@ZHODY the delfinator: Thanks for pointing that out! Fixed now :D

@ZHODY the delfinator: Thanks for pointing that out! Fixed now :D
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Jet (Guest), April 28th, 2017, 10:39 am
nice update
*points at tiny audino in corner of panel* love seeing my favorit pokemon no matter how small XD also i love stories within stories, like not everything has to be plot relivant but it helps add to the world building.
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Shawn (Guest), May 4th, 2017, 10:53 pm
Yay! You've returned!
(Or more accurately, I've returned to a new batch of comics!) I must reiterate what someone else already said: nice worldbuilding here. And nice showing N's reaction to a Nuzlocke wipeout at the E4.
A few errors though:
The speech bubble after the fourth panel: it should read "other regions championships get regular challenges. Some leagues can even get more than one challenger in a month."
A few errors though:
The speech bubble after the fourth panel: it should read "other regions championships get regular challenges. Some leagues can even get more than one challenger in a month."
Reply pipipipi, April 27th, 2017, 7:13 pm
Also, E4 challenges are usually covered by the media, so that last challenger's team death was probably some kind of a regional outrage at some point.
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